after highlighting the link words and the main arguments in Manon's paper, you had to correct your own mistakes.
We then started our new sequence. It's going to deal with Afro American music. But for the moment, we have only commented on this picture... As you I didn't show you the whole photograph but only the bottom of it... what you said might seem gruesome. Here is what we wrote in the copybook anyway:
The document is a photograph/picture. It depicts/represents a party that is taking place in the US in the 50's, according, to me because men are wearing hats and women are wearing old-fashioned dresses. The mob / crowd may be celebrating the end of the war. They look like they are dancing. They are smiling. They are having a good time. A woman in the foreground is pregnant. She is enjoying herself. However, a man in the foreground isstaring at us/looking at us intensely.
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The document is a photograph/picture. It depicts/represents a party that is taking place in the US in the 50's according to me because men are wearing hats and women are wearing old-fashion<br />
dresses.<br />
A lot of people may be celebrating the end of the war. They look like they are dancing. They are smiling. They are having a good time. A woman in the foreground is pregnent. She is enjoying<br />
herself. However, a man in the foreground is staring at us/looking at us intensely.<br />
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E
English Prof
10/13/2009 18:27
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thanks for the lesson Guillaume<br />
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