One session was too short to work on how to make an account and how to make fewer mistakes when writing essays in English. I handed Papers 1 back to you and we went through all this. Daphné, sorry we didn't have time for you. You will present your current issue on November 5th. I will see you next Wednesday for your bts blanc.
Do not forget to bring your dictionaries
Do not forget your Internship Reports
Paper nr 2 will be due on November 12th.
In the meantime all of you are to send me the summary of this video about Online Shopping. This will help you... Due November 5th at the latest..
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This video deals with the increasing place of online shopping.Moreover, it shows us the fact that consumers expose themselves to risks because they give various informations to buy something on the<br />
Internet like : credit card number, phone number, name, adress... Indeed they have to choose a secured website ( with a phone number for consumers service, with physical adress).<br />
As it mentionned in the video a lot more purchases on the Internet are safe because websites transform the personal informations into crypted data, in order to allow people to buy safely.<br />
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English Prof
11/09/2009 09:40
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Good morning Aristid<br />
Here is your correction:<br />
It shows us that consumers... DELETE the fact<br />
various information (sans "s"information est un nom indénombrable)<br />
address<br />
with a physical address<br />
As it is mentioned<br />
information<br />
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Your English is quite correct. You need a conclusion though<br />
Your grade is 4/5<br />
Ms Aboulker<br />
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Safia Blimi
11/04/2009 23:45
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This video deals with the shopping on internet.<br />
Indeed, sometimes the prices are cheaper on-line but it exist some risks because we give his/her information personal it is thus necessary to pay attention on hacker.<br />
To buy on-line is easier but we cannot test products<br />
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English Prof
11/05/2009 17:18
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Good afternoon Safia,<br />
You were absent this morning, I hope your are alright.<br />
Here is your correction:<br />
...with shopping on the Internet<br />
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...the prices are lower... but there are some risks becaus we give our personal information. ...to pay attention to hackers.<br />
YOUR SUMMARY IS TOO SHORT AND INCOMPLETE. THERE ARE SOME GOOD THINGS THOUGH<br />
YOUR GRADE IS 2/5<br />
SEE YOU<br />
MS ABOULKER<br />
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Etienne
11/04/2009 23:16
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This video is a report by Stacy Johnson about online shopping and his risks.<br />
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More and more Americans are followers of this practice because it’s easy to find products less expensive than we can find in stores while staying at home.<br />
However, when we buy online we communicate personal and confidential infomartions which poses trust and security problem.<br />
That’s why we can find logos that certify websites and assistance service authenticity.<br />
But we must be vigilant because there are also false logos to fool the buyer.<br />
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To conclude, Stacy Johnson said if it would not be better and safer to buy in stores but in my opinion I think that if people only buy on known and recognized websites there would be fewer<br />
problems.<br />
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English Prof
11/05/2009 17:14
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Good afternoon Etienne,<br />
Here is your correction:<br />
...and its risks<br />
to find cheaper products<br />
information (sans "s" c'est un indénombrable)<br />
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said it would be better and sager to buy online<br />
This a good summary Etienne,<br />
yOUR GRADE IS 4/5<br />
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Julie DE SOUSA ROSA
11/04/2009 21:39
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This video is about online shopping. Indeed, shopping online is more and more fashionable. People have no time to go in shops but after work or even during the night there is still the<br />
internet.Nevertheless there is some inconvenient. The principal one is that people share all personal informations : name, telephone numbers, numbers of their credit cards…<br />
All those informations doesn’t be protected and it is a big risk for the consumer. That's why it is important to consult the site and all garantees that it offers.<br />
Moreover at the end of the video the presentator show us an other risk. The fact that local shops are paying taxes and that it is important to them to have real consumers.<br />
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English Prof
11/05/2009 17:10
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Good afternoon Julie,<br />
Here is your correction:<br />
..to go To shops<br />
There are some drawbacks<br />
information (sans "s" c'est un nom indénombrable)<br />
credit card numbers<br />
All this (singulier) information is not protected<br />
the presenter showS us another risk. It is important For them ..<br />
This is good Julie. Your grade is 4.5/5<br />
Best regards<br />
Ms Aboulker<br />
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kevin
11/04/2009 21:16
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This spot raises a current issue, the increase of Online Shopping and its limits with the spot:<br />
“Safer Online Shopping”.<br />
At first, we can see that shopping becomes more and more virtual with the Internet’s expansion. This phenomenon has changed in legal parlance our consumption.<br />
People speak mostly the different avantages but this shopping has many limits.<br />
At second, we are told that this spot shows that much remains to be done for safety’s sake.<br />
Indeed, the principal danger is the consumer’s protection more particularly during the purchase order.<br />
In conclusion, I would like to say that this TV spot is a means to inform People on the danger of this type of shopping.<br />
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English Prof
11/05/2009 17:06
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Good afternoon Kevin,<br />
Here is your correction<br />
it is not a spot but a news report<br />
with the expansion of the Internet<br />
People speak mostly OF the different advantages<br />
Otherwise this is good Your grade is 4.5/5<br />
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See you<br />
Ms Abouker<br />
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