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Elsa, the 7th mermaid = a parody of a fairy tale + reported speech

Hey,

 

today we first read a new text entitled "The Pangs of Love" and analysed it briefly to see why we could say it was a subverted fairy tale.


The main character, Elsa, is a mermaid but unlike her sisters (and the famous mermaid of Hans Christian Anderson), she is not polite at all. She is rude and quite coarse. She is even punished at the end. She is sent to the cave and "made to miss her supper".

 

Then we worked on speech verbs and we improved the story with verbs that were more meaningful than /say/... Here is what we wrote in the copybooks:

 

"to be written by Félix / William"

 

We also had time to work on reported speech. Here are the sentences that we made:


- she said she didn't see why she had done it.

- she insisted disrespectfully that love for a man was ridiculous.

- she didn't know how she had suffered for love.

- she retorted that she didn't understand this "suffered for love".

- she added that she sounded very silly and obviously had spoiled her life.

- the mother admitted that she might have spoiled her life.

- the little mermaid asked in a high-pitched voice what he had done.

- the mother admitted that he had done nothing.

- the mermaid wanted to know what he sacrified for her. (= asked what he had sacrificed)

- the mother answered that he hadn't sacrificed a lot and added that she believed they didn't on the whole and that it didn't stop mermaids loving them. (= humans)

- the mermaid shouted that it would stop her and she said that she had to get a look at some of that mankind and perhaps she would then understand more.

- her mother reminded her that she had to wait until her 15th birthday
and that it had always been the rule with her sisters.

- the 7th mermaid swore and whispered that times changed. And she added that she was as mature now as her sisters had been at 15. She asked her if she agreed for the day after.

- her mother replied that she was sure she didn't. 

 

HW: finish re-writing the direct dialogue into reported speech until the end of the text.


Don't forget that Group 1 needs to turn in their parodies by Tuesday 11th by email (so that I have time to help you improve your pronunciation) and same thing for group 2 but by Thursday 13th.

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W
<br /> -She didn't see why she had done it<br /> <br /> -she insisted respectfully that love for a man was ridiculous<br /> <br /> -she didn't know how she had suffered for love<br /> <br /> -she retorted that she didn't nderstand this "suffered for love"<br /> <br /> -she added that she sounded vert silly and obvously had spoiled her life<br /> <br /> -the mother admitted that she might have spoiled her life<br /> <br /> -the little mermaid asked in a high-pitched voice what he had done<br /> <br /> -the mother admitted that he had done nothing<br /> <br /> -the mermaid wanted to know what he sacrified for her(= asked what he had sacrificed)<br /> <br /> -the mother answered that he hadn't sacrifed a lot and added that she believed they didn't on the whole and that it didn't stophe mermaid loving them(= human)<br /> <br /> -the mermaid shouted that it would her she said that she had to get a look at some of mankind and perhaps she would then understand more<br /> <br /> -her mother reminded her that she had to wait until her 15th birthday<br /> and that had always been the rule with her sisters<br /> <br /> -the 17th mermaid whispered that shit; times changed. And she added that she was as mature now as her sisters had been at 15. She asked how about the day after<br /> <br /> -her mother replied that she was sure she didn't<br /> <br /> <br />
E
<br /> <br /> Thanks William for the update<br /> <br /> <br /> <br />
J
<br /> Est ce qu'on doit respecter une couleur particuliere pour le livre sur didapages ?<br /> <br /> <br />
E
<br /> <br /> No you can do as you please but it may be a good idea to coordinate the colours with the colours of your own illustrations, wouldn't it?<br /> <br /> <br /> <br />
L
<br /> Hi.<br /> We wanted to know if it's possible to send you our Fairy Tales later because we didn't have the time to finish it.<br /> <br /> <br />
E
<br /> <br /> Hi Girls,<br /> <br /> <br /> it's possible but you know the rules. If you don't respect the dead lines, there is a penalty...<br /> <br /> <br /> It's up to you.<br /> Take care,<br /> M. Hattais.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br />
C
<br /> We would like to know if the explanations of the vocabulary in our parody must be in english or in french.<br /> We have put some reported speech in our parody but we don't know if it's enough. Approximatively, how many sentences are you waiting for ?<br /> <br /> <br />
E
<br /> <br /> Hello Girls,<br /> <br /> <br /> as far as the reported speech is concerned it should only be used where necessary to make action more dynamic. Let's say an average of 3 sentences sounds good.<br /> <br /> <br /> Take care,<br /> <br /> <br /> M. Hattais.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br />
J
<br /> For next tuesday we just have to send you the text of our parody or we also have to record our voice when we read it? Because we still have to change a few things...<br /> Do you also need the illustrations?<br /> <br /> <br />
E
<br /> <br /> Hi Juliette,<br /> <br /> <br /> for Tuesday, I just need your text so that I can record a "model" for you to read properly with the correct intonation. Don't bother sending me anything else. Afterwards, you could always send me<br /> your audio file if you want me to correct it before including it in your ebook.<br /> <br /> <br /> Alright?<br /> <br /> <br /> Take care,<br /> M. Hattais.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br />