Hi,
today we first corrected today's assignment, i.e. how to express positive comments (apart from it's good...). Hope this will help you to improve your future essays.
Then we continued working on the correction of your last mock exam and we particularly focused our attention on some translation techniques. Here they are:
"to be written by..."
Oops... I forgot to bring Sonia's gift today... sorry but she didn't even remember to ask me for it... argh... what a goldfish I am...!
HW: for next time, I gave you a list of grammar exercises to try and eliminate the regular mistakes from your written expression. You need to complete the exercises in which you often make mistakes. Go and check the grammar rule before on the web and then complete the exercises. It will help you proofread your essays and narratives.